* Khushi Ki Duniya *: * Aakhri Khat *

* Aakhri Khat *

10 comments:

Dan* said...: nice and looks good !

good work !!; Aug 24, 2008 5:15:00 PM
विक्रांत बेशर्मा said...: looks great!!!

amazing.; Aug 24, 2008 8:48:00 PM
kabira said...: आखिरी ख़त पढ़ कर बहुत दुःख हुआ ,ऐसे लगा जैसे किसी की सच्ची कहानी बयाँ कर दी हो आपने.
आखिरी ख़त था की सांस आखिरी
आया की ज़िन्दगी को हमने खो दिया
ये दास्ताँ थी आपकी या हमारी
इसे पढ़ कर क्यों कबीरा रो दिया; Aug 28, 2008 12:11:00 AM
Ranjeet Kr. Vimal said...: it may b "aakhari khat", but this is not "aakhri comment"..nice and unique blog.. read mine
http://bugsnerror.blogspot.com; Aug 28, 2008 10:16:00 AM
*KHUSHI* said...: आखिरी ख़त था की सांस आखिरी
आया की ज़िन्दगी को हमने खो दिया
ये दास्ताँ थी आपकी या हमारी
इसे पढ़ कर क्यों कबीरा रो दिया

bahut hi sundar panktiya likhi hai apane kabiraji..thanks; Aug 30, 2008 11:00:00 AM
abhipar said...: Hi ~~KHUSHI~~xclnt piece of work ..really touchy...keep it up...coin some golden poems like this....; Sep 15, 2008 10:06:00 AM
abhipar said...: Hi ~~after going thro all your poems ...beleive me ..i have become one the greatest fan of YOURS TRULY...; Sep 15, 2008 10:10:00 AM
vishnu-luvingheart said...: gud one creation....marvellous..keep it up; Sep 27, 2008 1:59:00 PM
Dev said...: Hi Khishi....
Really u have a lovely heart and also have the art to explan it.....
Aap ki poems me pyar ki gahrai hai, jisme dobne ka ji chahta hai...jisme jine ka ji chahta hai...
i love ur poems..
http://dev-poetry.blogspot.com/; Oct 6, 2008 9:16:00 PM
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