बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है !!!!
nice.. very insightful!
oops... i dont read hindi :!
ho ho. I don know hindi...
khushi ji bahot hi bhav diya hai aapne is rachana me ... aapko iske liye dhero badhai swikar karen...Arsh
bahut sunder likha hai...
hi...nicely written poemder r sum mistakes...do rectifytruth is reflected in the poemharithado visit ma blog n comment
सुंदर कविता
thanks 2 all ..and who dont know hindi thn sorry i cant help it..thanks abhishek and haritha for showing my mistakes...
dil ki awaz bahut sundar rachna hai .dosti ki kasam khane vale dost nahi hote....kya khoob kaha gaya hai....sure
Sonalji..Many thanks for writing such beautiful poetry and for ur nice comments on my ghazal too...I like ur expressions ...
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Oct 18, 2008 11:55:00 PM
बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है !!!!
Oct 19, 2008 12:26:00 AM
nice.. very insightful!
Oct 19, 2008 3:32:00 PM
oops... i dont read hindi :!
Oct 19, 2008 7:26:00 PM
ho ho. I don know hindi...
Oct 20, 2008 8:58:00 PM
khushi ji bahot hi bhav diya hai aapne is rachana me ... aapko iske liye dhero badhai swikar karen...
Arsh
Oct 21, 2008 3:10:00 PM
bahut sunder likha hai...
Oct 21, 2008 7:57:00 PM
hi...
nicely written poem
der r sum mistakes...do rectify
truth is reflected in the poem
haritha
do visit ma blog n comment
Oct 21, 2008 11:12:00 PM
सुंदर कविता
Oct 22, 2008 8:46:00 PM
thanks 2 all ..and who dont know hindi thn sorry i cant help it..
thanks abhishek and haritha for showing my mistakes...
Nov 15, 2008 12:25:00 PM
dil ki awaz bahut sundar rachna hai .dosti ki kasam khane vale dost nahi hote....kya khoob kaha gaya hai
....sure
Nov 19, 2008 9:42:00 AM
Sonalji..Many thanks for writing such beautiful poetry and for ur nice comments on my ghazal too...
I like ur expressions ...