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12 comments:

विक्रांत बेशर्मा said...

बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है !!!!

Kalidas said...

nice.. very insightful!

smile-a-mile said...

oops... i dont read hindi :!

Crazy guy said...

ho ho. I don know hindi...

abhishek said...

very nice creation
but there are some spelling mistakes but does't matter

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Prakash singh "Arsh" said...

khushi ji bahot hi bhav diya hai aapne is rachana me ... aapko iske liye dhero badhai swikar karen...

Arsh

मीत said...

bahut sunder likha hai...

haritha said...

hi...
nicely written poem
der r sum mistakes...do rectify
truth is reflected in the poem

haritha
do visit ma blog n comment

वर्षा said...

सुंदर कविता

*KHUSHI* said...

thanks 2 all ..and who dont know hindi thn sorry i cant help it..

thanks abhishek and haritha for showing my mistakes...

"SURE" said...

dil ki awaz bahut sundar rachna hai .dosti ki kasam khane vale dost nahi hote....kya khoob kaha gaya hai
....sure

Pramod Kumar Kush ''tanha" said...

Sonalji..Many thanks for writing such beautiful poetry and for ur nice comments on my ghazal too...

I like ur expressions ...

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