* Khushi Ki Duniya *: * दिल की आवाज़ *

* दिल की आवाज़ *

12 comments:

विक्रांत बेशर्मा said...: बहुत ही सुंदर रचना है !!!!; Oct 18, 2008 11:55:00 PM
Kalidas said...: nice.. very insightful!; Oct 19, 2008 12:26:00 AM
smile-a-mile said...: oops... i dont read hindi :!; Oct 19, 2008 3:32:00 PM
Crazy guy said...: ho ho. I don know hindi...; Oct 19, 2008 7:26:00 PM
abhishek said...: very nice creation
but there are some spelling mistakes but does't matter

keep updating

keep visiting my blog i updated my blog
love to hav ur comments
placeofloves.bogspot.com; Oct 20, 2008 1:53:00 PM
Prakash singh "Arsh" said...: khushi ji bahot hi bhav diya hai aapne is rachana me ... aapko iske liye dhero badhai swikar karen...

Arsh; Oct 20, 2008 8:58:00 PM
मीत said...: bahut sunder likha hai...; Oct 21, 2008 3:10:00 PM
haritha said...: hi...
nicely written poem
der r sum mistakes...do rectify
truth is reflected in the poem

haritha
do visit ma blog n comment; Oct 21, 2008 7:57:00 PM
वर्षा said...: सुंदर कविता; Oct 21, 2008 11:12:00 PM
*KHUSHI* said...: thanks 2 all ..and who dont know hindi thn sorry i cant help it..

thanks abhishek and haritha for showing my mistakes...; Oct 22, 2008 8:46:00 PM
"SURE" said...: dil ki awaz bahut sundar rachna hai .dosti ki kasam khane vale dost nahi hote....kya khoob kaha gaya hai
....sure; Nov 15, 2008 12:25:00 PM
Pramod Kumar Kush ''tanha" said...: Sonalji..Many thanks for writing such beautiful poetry and for ur nice comments on my ghazal too...

I like ur expressions ...; Nov 19, 2008 9:42:00 AM