bichhad jaate hain sapne toot jaate hain sare khwaab sirf ek galat fehemi se rishto me padti hai daraar apno ka toot jata hai saath sirf ek galat fehemi se.......
very true
good poem about misunderstanding and easy langauge. i really liked it thanks for posting khushi
Well said, surely something very true. Though i guess, everyone acknowledges the fact, yet when it creeps in to someone's life, one is hardly able to see and just in a flick of seconds, damage is done. Keep up, specially the way you can curve it into a poetry.....
बहुत दिनों बाद आना हुआ यहाँ...... आपने इस बीच क्या-क्या रच डाला.... इक ग़लतफ़हमी थी गाफिल हमें कि अच्छा लिखते हैं.... आपके ब्लॉग पे आके लगा कि थे हम ग़लतफ़हमी से.... शुक्र है कि मौत ने आके हमें आ कर बच्चा लिया... मर ही जाते वरना हाय जिंदगी की ग़लतफहमी से..... बहुत-बहुत उम्दा रचना....बधाई.....................मैं नहीं जानता कि गलतफहमी.....सही शब्द है.....साथ ही उर्दू में ग़लतफेहमी भी कोई शब्द है....अगर हाँ तो कभी अपन भी इसका इस्तेमाल कर लिया करेंगे.....अगर नहीं....तो आपको इस पर ध्यान देना होगा.....!!बाकी आप अच्छा तो लिखते हो ही.....!!
guru tussi chha gaye....sach mai pictures can speak....i like the way u present ur feelings?? keep going....and hey where r u ?? no comment from ur site.....look if u wana sent bad comment i wll try to recoverd my self.....
hmm..well done.perhaps the best part was that u have a horrific backdrop with KHUSHI written over it! :) perhaps that was the silver lining! well done again! have a poetry blog too-- http://abhaymittal.blogspot.com
misunderstanding....is the root cause of so many prblms in world,man differs with another,and so doing the nations,relationship of husband wife,lover beloved,brother brother all are facing this misunderstanding...if we hv confidence and faith on others we can win the heart and world.....liked ur poetry very much,nicely written on human relationship regards sure
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i liked ur poem
keep it up
best of luck for ur next poems
Nice..
Ur poems actually sound like rhyming dialogues which can be used in hindi movies
first time here .... thats one colorful blog ... just loved the appearance ... truly its a world of happiness (khushi ki duniya) .. :D
bichhad jaate hain sapne
toot jaate hain sare khwaab
sirf ek galat fehemi se
rishto me padti hai daraar
apno ka toot jata hai saath
sirf ek galat fehemi se.......
very true
good poem about misunderstanding and easy langauge. i really liked it thanks for posting khushi
lo ham bhi aa gaye...
Khusi ki dunia me.
:)
Well said, surely something very true. Though i guess, everyone acknowledges the fact, yet when it creeps in to someone's life, one is hardly able to see and just in a flick of seconds, damage is done.
Keep up, specially the way you can curve it into a poetry.....
thanks everybody...
बहुत दिनों बाद आना हुआ यहाँ......
आपने इस बीच क्या-क्या रच डाला....
इक ग़लतफ़हमी थी गाफिल हमें कि अच्छा लिखते हैं....
आपके ब्लॉग पे आके लगा कि थे हम ग़लतफ़हमी से....
शुक्र है कि मौत ने आके हमें आ कर बच्चा लिया...
मर ही जाते वरना हाय जिंदगी की ग़लतफहमी से.....
बहुत-बहुत उम्दा रचना....बधाई.....................मैं नहीं जानता कि गलतफहमी.....सही शब्द है.....साथ ही उर्दू में ग़लतफेहमी भी कोई शब्द है....अगर हाँ तो कभी अपन भी इसका इस्तेमाल कर लिया करेंगे.....अगर नहीं....तो आपको इस पर ध्यान देना होगा.....!!बाकी आप अच्छा तो लिखते हो ही.....!!
guru tussi chha gaye....sach mai pictures can speak....i like the way u present ur feelings??
keep going....and hey where r u ?? no comment from ur site.....look if u wana sent bad comment i wll try to recoverd my self.....
Jai Ho Magalmay Ho ....
bhoothnathji, meri galti mai manti hu...aapka shukriya meri galti dikhane ke liye...
vishji..thanks..tht u like my work..
@Khushi,
beautiful poem..... keep it up.
BTW, sometimes it is better to just sit and talk. a lot of misunderstandings get resolved. pity is, none of us does so :(
hope you do not mind my comment. just wrote what came to mind
lo jii hum bhi aagai khushi ki duniya main..bohot hi sachi tehreer galatfehmi to zindagi main ta-umr ke liye dararein chhor deti hai...
keep sharing ur thoughts.
aarzoo.
@ Hashir Tufail, i agree with ur comments so dotn worry.. and thanks for adding my blog in ur network
@ Aarzoo,aap ka swaagat hai iss duniya mai. shukriya waqt nikal ke yaha aane ke liye.
hmm..well done.perhaps the best part was that u have a horrific backdrop with KHUSHI written over it! :)
perhaps that was the silver lining!
well done again!
have a poetry blog too--
http://abhaymittal.blogspot.com
misunderstanding....is the root cause of so many prblms in world,man differs with another,and so doing the nations,relationship of husband wife,lover beloved,brother brother all are facing this misunderstanding...if we hv confidence and faith on others we can win the heart and world.....liked ur poetry very much,nicely written on human relationship
regards
sure
बहुत अच्छा लिखती हैं आप
nice way f writin ur poems..
u seem to be a techie poet! :P
cheers! :)
Very well Written....
Keep IT UP!!!
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