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19 comments:
Mast hai...
picturisation through words..... a great art,different activities of different strata of society at a single place...its our railway( may be mumbai ki local or anywhare else')emotionful poem....good work
Wah..wa
achhi kavita hai bhai...
Yep, there you truly see all the shades and shapes of life. I think they truly symbolize life.
Nicely put.....
hmm not bad
actually a nice poem abt mumbai local
but aur achhi ho sakti thi yaar kuch mazaa nahi
^ aap sabhi ka shukriya..
@ Abhishek, aap ne sahi kaha shaayd aur acche se likh sakte thay.. kintu kafi lambi poem ho jati to padhne mai utna maza nahi aata..
By The Way, ye maine jo likha hai khud ka anubhav yaha kavita ke roop mai post kiya hai.
mumbai ki locel..apne ap me ek jivan he..me khud mumbai ka hu aour bahut se anubhav mere mastishk me bhi ked he..me achchi tarah se samjh sakta hu is jindgi ko...aapki shabd maalaa me rachnatmak mahak he..jo achchi lagi
nice one...
oh mujhey apne purane din yaad aa gaye local train ke.bahut achha chitarn kiya aur tasveerein bhi bahut kuch yad dila gai. dhanya vaad.
hey khushi after reading this post. i inspired to write something about our delhi metro.
so i try to write some lines on delhi metro
plzz checkit out on my blog :)
hi.u really write very nice poems............please keep up the good work..........
bahut hi badiya. lokal train ke yatrion ke jariye aapne aam aadmi ki majbooriyan or khushiyon ka bahut hi achha varan kiya hai.
picture ke saath rachna padhna jaise ehsaas ko jina hai
aapne aam aadmi ko jaise puri tarah likh diya ho
bhaut bahut badhayi
^ aap sab ka shukriya...
achhi hai kavita, our tasweeren bhi!
very nice ;) but u acutally create that ? :P
good anyways.. mumbai local is great :D
esp. borivili to churchgate :P
Hey Khushi,
really nice... this is much much better than what I had put up on the Dombivali station... I am not a regular you see, and am just putting things up slowly. I dont know if you already have read it or not, but you can read the Recession Poem I had put up.
That is more complete. Also, if you able to put your poems in angrezi, then you may also get a few phiriangi poet lovers drooling over your blog... and some people from south India are not well versed with Hindi, may find it difficult to read. Just suggestions for improvement.
Also enable comments for people who have personal web blogs, not the ones on blogger.com or wordpress.com. I could actually post coz I have a blogger id.
There are people who don;t even blog but read blogs. and If those need to comment then either they have to sign up for Open Id or create a google account.
Beautifull Screenplay.... and you explain the senario great.. its shoiwng your observation level as great poet... and i apprecite you for your way of showing shares designing with photographs. keep itup
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