* Khushi Ki Duniya *

1. Nikhil Agarwal says:
   Jan 23, 2009 8:37:00 PM

   Mast hai...

   
2. "SURE" says:
   Jan 23, 2009 10:43:00 PM

   picturisation through words..... a great art,different activities of different strata of society at a single place...its our railway( may be mumbai ki local or anywhare else')emotionful poem....good work

   
3. योगेन्द्र मौदगिल says:
   Jan 26, 2009 9:00:00 PM

   Wah..wa
   achhi kavita hai bhai...

   
4. Sandy says:
   Jan 27, 2009 11:58:00 AM

   Yep, there you truly see all the shades and shapes of life. I think they truly symbolize life.
   Nicely put.....

   
5. *KHUSHI* says:
   Jan 27, 2009 1:28:00 PM

   ^ aap sabhi ka shukriya..
   
   @ Abhishek, aap ne sahi kaha shaayd aur acche se likh sakte thay.. kintu kafi lambi poem ho jati to padhne mai utna maza nahi aata..
   By The Way, ye maine jo likha hai khud ka anubhav yaha kavita ke roop mai post kiya hai.

   
6. अमिताभ श्रीवास्तव says:
   Jan 28, 2009 7:53:00 PM

   mumbai ki locel..apne ap me ek jivan he..me khud mumbai ka hu aour bahut se anubhav mere mastishk me bhi ked he..me achchi tarah se samjh sakta hu is jindgi ko...aapki shabd maalaa me rachnatmak mahak he..jo achchi lagi

   
7. bhawna says:
   Feb 1, 2009 8:41:00 PM

   oh mujhey apne purane din yaad aa gaye local train ke.bahut achha chitarn kiya aur tasveerein bhi bahut kuch yad dila gai. dhanya vaad.

   
8. ASHISH says:
   Feb 4, 2009 1:32:00 AM

   hi.u really write very nice poems............please keep up the good work..........

   
9. शिवराज गूजर. says:
   Feb 6, 2009 9:42:00 PM

   bahut hi badiya. lokal train ke yatrion ke jariye aapne aam aadmi ki majbooriyan or khushiyon ka bahut hi achha varan kiya hai.

   
10. श्रद्धा जैन says:
    Feb 8, 2009 3:33:00 PM

    picture ke saath rachna padhna jaise ehsaas ko jina hai
    aapne aam aadmi ko jaise puri tarah likh diya ho
    bhaut bahut badhayi

    
11. *KHUSHI* says:
    Feb 8, 2009 3:40:00 PM

    ^ aap sab ka shukriya...

    
12. Abhijit Dharmadhikari says:
    Feb 19, 2009 10:54:00 PM

    achhi hai kavita, our tasweeren bhi!

    
13. Soumya Shankar Bohidar says:
    Feb 23, 2009 6:30:00 PM

    very nice ;) but u acutally create that ? :P
    
    good anyways.. mumbai local is great :D
    
    esp. borivili to churchgate :P

    
14. Hemal Shah says:
    Mar 18, 2009 2:15:00 AM

    Hey Khushi,
    
    really nice... this is much much better than what I had put up on the Dombivali station... I am not a regular you see, and am just putting things up slowly. I dont know if you already have read it or not, but you can read the Recession Poem I had put up.
    
    That is more complete. Also, if you able to put your poems in angrezi, then you may also get a few phiriangi poet lovers drooling over your blog... and some people from south India are not well versed with Hindi, may find it difficult to read. Just suggestions for improvement.
    
    Also enable comments for people who have personal web blogs, not the ones on blogger.com or wordpress.com. I could actually post coz I have a blogger id.
    
    There are people who don;t even blog but read blogs. and If those need to comment then either they have to sign up for Open Id or create a google account.

    
15. Jhani says:
    Apr 6, 2009 3:05:00 PM

    Beautifull Screenplay.... and you explain the senario great.. its shoiwng your observation level as great poet... and i apprecite you for your way of showing shares designing with photographs. keep itup

    

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