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aayi re aayi re khushi khushi khushi...but kahan hai khushi....mere blog par bhi dastak dai.....or han yaar nice work keep it up??? Jai Ho mangalmay ho
Nice one. keep writing like this.
An awesome way to express yourself. This is the first of its kind in my sight.A truly beautiful blog. Keep rocking.http://blogwp.mtaram.com
अच्छी भावनाएं हैं... लेकिन शब्दों में कई अशुद्धियाँ हैं... लिखतीं रहें...
shukriya Vish, Aashish and Utakrash.@ Neeraj kumar, shukriya, aur aap ne sahi farmayaa, hum kabool karte hai ki hamari hindi itni shuddha nahi,shayad likhte likhte aur padhte padhte acchi ho jayegi.
Arey Janab hamain to aanay main thori si dair hogaye khair yeh to acha hai ke hamain Hindi aati hai *KHUSHI* ji thori bohat samajh aajati hai...Apke is intakhab ke liye main kiya kahon har bar ki tarha is bar bhi aap ne hamaray dil ko chu liya bohat khoob...Dene wala aapko wo har KHUSHI de jo apke haq main hai mere dua hai.....~ MHB ~
nice poetry
Nice.A fellow poet.
@ Mairaj, shukriya.. lekin hame aap jaisi Urdu nahi aati, thodi si samj mai aati hai.@ Atul, thanks and I replied to ur poem too. that was Awesome..@ MonAmi, thanks a lot
khushi , bahut hi sundar bhaav aur abhivyakti li hui kavita , meri badhai sweekar karen.
खुश रहो खुशी , अच्छी कविता ,कुछ अशुद्दियां हैं।मेरा ब्लोग -- visit- -the world of my thoughts,,shyamsmriti... &---shyam saahity
kitna sundar likhti ho tum Khushi aaj baithkar sari kavitayen padhungi ..hats off to you ..
wow yaar bahut hi shandar.......................
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aayi re aayi re khushi khushi khushi...but kahan hai khushi....mere blog par bhi dastak dai.....or han yaar nice work keep it up???
Jai Ho mangalmay ho
Nice one. keep writing like this.
An awesome way to express yourself. This is the first of its kind in my sight.
A truly beautiful blog.
Keep rocking.
http://blogwp.mtaram.com
अच्छी भावनाएं हैं... लेकिन शब्दों में कई अशुद्धियाँ हैं... लिखतीं रहें...
shukriya Vish, Aashish and Utakrash.
@ Neeraj kumar, shukriya, aur aap ne sahi farmayaa, hum kabool karte hai ki hamari hindi itni shuddha nahi,shayad likhte likhte aur padhte padhte acchi ho jayegi.
Arey Janab hamain to aanay main thori si dair hogaye khair yeh to acha hai ke hamain Hindi aati hai *KHUSHI* ji thori bohat samajh aajati hai...
Apke is intakhab ke liye main kiya kahon har bar ki tarha is bar bhi aap ne hamaray dil ko chu liya bohat khoob...
Dene wala aapko wo har KHUSHI de jo apke haq main hai mere dua hai.....
~ MHB ~
nice poetry
Nice.A fellow poet.
@ Mairaj, shukriya.. lekin hame aap jaisi Urdu nahi aati, thodi si samj mai aati hai.
@ Atul, thanks and I replied to ur poem too. that was Awesome..
@ MonAmi, thanks a lot
khushi , bahut hi sundar bhaav aur abhivyakti li hui kavita , meri badhai sweekar karen.
खुश रहो खुशी , अच्छी कविता ,कुछ अशुद्दियां हैं।
मेरा ब्लोग -- visit-
-the world of my thoughts,,shyamsmriti... &
---shyam saahity
kitna sundar likhti ho tum Khushi aaj baithkar sari kavitayen padhungi ..hats off to you ..
wow yaar bahut hi shandar.......................
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