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13 comments:

VisH said...

aayi re aayi re khushi khushi khushi...but kahan hai khushi....mere blog par bhi dastak dai.....or han yaar nice work keep it up???


Jai Ho mangalmay ho

Ashish Sukhadeve said...

Nice one. keep writing like this.

Utkarsh Verma said...

An awesome way to express yourself. This is the first of its kind in my sight.

A truly beautiful blog.

Keep rocking.

http://blogwp.mtaram.com

नीरज कुमार said...

अच्छी भावनाएं हैं... लेकिन शब्दों में कई अशुद्धियाँ हैं... लिखतीं रहें...

*KHUSHI* said...

shukriya Vish, Aashish and Utakrash.
@ Neeraj kumar, shukriya, aur aap ne sahi farmayaa, hum kabool karte hai ki hamari hindi itni shuddha nahi,shayad likhte likhte aur padhte padhte acchi ho jayegi.

Mairaj said...

Arey Janab hamain to aanay main thori si dair hogaye khair yeh to acha hai ke hamain Hindi aati hai *KHUSHI* ji thori bohat samajh aajati hai...

Apke is intakhab ke liye main kiya kahon har bar ki tarha is bar bhi aap ne hamaray dil ko chu liya bohat khoob...

Dene wala aapko wo har KHUSHI de jo apke haq main hai mere dua hai.....

~ MHB ~

Atul said...

nice poetry

MonAmi said...

Nice.A fellow poet.

*KHUSHI* said...

@ Mairaj, shukriya.. lekin hame aap jaisi Urdu nahi aati, thodi si samj mai aati hai.

@ Atul, thanks and I replied to ur poem too. that was Awesome..

@ MonAmi, thanks a lot

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

khushi , bahut hi sundar bhaav aur abhivyakti li hui kavita , meri badhai sweekar karen.

Dr. shyam gupta said...

खुश रहो खुशी , अच्छी कविता ,कुछ अशुद्दियां हैं।
मेरा ब्लोग -- visit-
-the world of my thoughts,,shyamsmriti... &
---shyam saahity

tikulicious said...

kitna sundar likhti ho tum Khushi aaj baithkar sari kavitayen padhungi ..hats off to you ..

Dilbar said...

wow yaar bahut hi shandar.......................

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