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20 comments:

M VERMA said...

जी लेने दो इस पल को
हमे आज कोई ना रोको
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यह सुन्दर एहसास == यह जीजिविषा
बहुत अच्छी लगी आपकी रचना

awaz do humko said...

बहुत अच्छी लगी आपकी रचना

*KHUSHI* said...

@ M VERMA shukriya.. kahin na kahin aam insaan bhi koi na koi jijivisha ke liye jinda hain...bas yehi darshane ki koshish ki hain.

@Awaz do humko , shukriya aapka..

Ultimatechange said...

Very well written..
Best Wishes!

Priyanka Agrawalla said...

Khushi, paheli baar aapke blog visit kiya hai.. Bahut khoob!

ye ehsas aapne bahut hi ache se jataya hai!

Priyanka

Ashish Sukhadeve said...

Khushi, you made me nostalgic with this poem, excellent,Keep it up. let the emotions keep articulating in such a great sonnets. Cheers!

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tikulicious said...

Bahut hi khoobsurat hai tumhari ye kavita khushi .. barish ka mera purana dostana hai ..kuch lamhe kuch yaden kuch boonden jo mujhe chu gayen ..likhti rehta..

Mairaj said...

*KHUSHI* ji itne dino bad wapas aakar aapke shairy main wohe baat dekhi jo kafi arsa pehle se main dekhta aaya hon bohat he umdah intekhab kiya hai is bar bhi mere taraf se daad qubool karen aur hamesha khush rahen yeh mere dua hai aur esi he likhte rahen :)
aapke duaon ka talabgar....

~MHB~

Pramod Kumar Kush 'tanha' said...

Har baar tumhe padhta huun mein
Har baar tumhe sunta huun mein
Jaisay kanto ke jungal se
Kuchh phool naye chunta huun mein.

Sunder kavita ke liye merii shubhkaamnaayein....

*KHUSHI* said...

thanks ultimatechange, priyanka and ashish

@teenchefgirl, thanks for ur vote and voted 4 u too..

tikuli,mairaj and tanhaji... . hausla badhane kel iye aap sab ka shukriya..

Smith Williams said...

WoW Khushi i am Nikhil Patel working in leading IT company in Ahmedabad,Gujarat.i have read your collection it's Mind-blowing, fibulas.
Keep it up.

अनिल कान्त : said...

Nice Poem Khushi

आकांक्षा~Akanksha said...

Jaisa apke blog ka nam, waisi hi masum bhavnayen...behad sarthak aur sundar prastuti !!

फ्रेण्डशिप-डे की शुभकामनायें. "शब्द-शिखर" पर देखें- ये दोस्ती हम नहीं तोडेंगे !!

sneha-akshitarak said...

http://hiralgajjar.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-post_07.html અક્ષિતારક - http://akshitarak.wordpress.com/2009/06/23/વાટકી-વ્યવ્હાર/
2.
http://hiralgajjar.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-post_06.html અક્ષિતારક - http://akshitarak.wordpress.com/2009/06/15/સઘળું-યે-તુજને-અર્પણ/
3.
http://hiralgajjar.blogspot.com/2009/07/blog-post_07.
http://akshitarak.wordpress.com/2009/05/21/જિંદગી-એક-પહેલી/


mny dear hiralben...aa badhi mari rachna che...tame ene tamara blog par muki eno anand..pan maru name j nahi niche????????kya to maru name lakho kya to del this rachnas.

*KHUSHI* said...

SNEHA.. stop spamming my blog.... I am ont hiral Gajjar. so plzz if u have any problem with thn reply in her blog...

Vijay Kumar Sappatti said...

khushi , bahut acchi poem , man ko chooti hui aur bhaavnao to tumne sahi shabd diye hai ... just kudos ....

aabhar

vijay

pls read my new poem "झील" on my poem blog " http://poemsofvijay.blogspot.com

Rahul Jauhari said...

Nice :-)

rahul said...

awesome lines

kshama said...

Bahot khoob Khushee ji!

Mai any rachnaon pe comment karna chaah rahee thee,lekin yahee box khula!

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