just awesome... keep writing... ----------------------------------- mere blog par meri nayi kavita, हाँ मुसलमान हूँ मैं..... jaroor aayein... aapki pratikriya ka intzaar rahega... regards.. http://i555.blogspot.com/ plz visit me back...
Achee kavita hai. Achae dil vale sabhee ko acha samjhte hain. Sabhee kon apne jaesa sajhte hain. baad main apno se hee chot khate hain. par essa kion hota hai?????
Hi Khushi, this poem speaks my state of mind right now. Very strange but looks like it was providential that I stumbled upon your blog now, and read this poem. The 3rd and 4th paras brought tears in my eyes.
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Awesome Poem.. Liked it very much!! It's a Real thing happens with so many people in their life :)
waah!
bahut badhiya man ke udgaar...
kunwar ji,
So well expressed pain that loved ones can give..
nice poem :)
hey i am following your blog
do check mine if u get time :)
http://deepakashyap123.blogspot.com/
Thanks everybody... :)
@Deepa, sure i will visit your blog :)
just awesome...
keep writing...
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mere blog par meri nayi kavita,
हाँ मुसलमान हूँ मैं.....
jaroor aayein...
aapki pratikriya ka intzaar rahega...
regards..
http://i555.blogspot.com/
plz visit me back...
bahut hi badhiya, maarmik rachnaatmak lekhan.
Expect better!!
@ Shekhar, shukriya aur humne aapki poems read ki hain aur comment bhi diya hain
@Arvind shukriya
@Rahul, will try to improve more... thanks :)
aapka blog bahut sundar hai :)
http://liberalflorence.blogspot.com/
aapka blog bahut sundar hai :)
http://liberalflorence.blogspot.com/
arse baad blog par aaya hoon bahut achchha lag raha hai.bahut hi realty wali rachna hai
mere blog par...
तुम आओ तो चिराग रौशन हों.......
regards
http://i555.blogspot.com/
Achee kavita hai.
Achae dil vale sabhee ko acha samjhte hain.
Sabhee kon apne jaesa sajhte hain.
baad main apno se hee chot khate hain.
par essa kion hota hai?????
Hardeep
shukriya Abhinna, shekhar aur Hardeepji... yuhi hamara hausla badhate rhaiye...
nice poetry wise words
जन्मदिन की हार्दिक शुभकामनाये
Shukriya Kabira ji.. :)
Hi Khushi, this poem speaks my state of mind right now. Very strange but looks like it was providential that I stumbled upon your blog now, and read this poem. The 3rd and 4th paras brought tears in my eyes.
Regds, Punam
nice poetry. it was good. :)
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