tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post4940386181763182074..comments2009-04-06T15:05:04.960+05:30*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-84151545303757958592009-04-06T15:05:00.000+05:302009-04-06T15:05:00.000+05:30Beautifull Screenplay.... and you explain the senario great.. its shoiwng your observation level as great poet... and i apprecite you for your way of showing shares designing with photographs. keep itupJhanihttp://dubaijhani.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-6900007769834413622009-03-18T02:15:00.000+05:302009-03-18T02:15:00.000+05:30Hey Khushi,<BR/><BR/>really nice... this is much much better than what I had put up on the Dombivali station... I am not a regular you see, and am just putting things up slowly. I dont know if you already have read it or not, but you can read the Recession Poem I had put up. <BR/><BR/>That is more complete. Also, if you able to put your poems in angrezi, then you may also get a few phiriangi poet lovers drooling over your blog... and some people from south India are not well versed with Hindi, may find it difficult to read. Just suggestions for improvement.<BR/><BR/>Also enable comments for people who have personal web blogs, not the ones on blogger.com or wordpress.com. I could actually post coz I have a blogger id. <BR/><BR/>There are people who don;t even blog but read blogs. and If those need to comment then either they have to sign up for Open Id or create a google account.Hemal Shahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11550738440598408711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-41200533873010483162009-02-23T18:30:00.000+05:302009-02-23T18:30:00.000+05:30very nice ;) but u acutally create that ? :P<BR/><BR/>good anyways.. mumbai local is great :D<BR/><BR/>esp. borivili to churchgate :PSoumya Shankar Bohidarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12817606667626182278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-39394996115153351872009-02-19T22:54:00.000+05:302009-02-19T22:54:00.000+05:30achhi hai kavita, our tasweeren bhi!Abhijit Dharmadhikarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05301639132611881681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-12648582699832870822009-02-08T15:40:00.000+05:302009-02-08T15:40:00.000+05:30^ aap sab ka shukriya...*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-10887856854977417062009-02-08T15:33:00.000+05:302009-02-08T15:33:00.000+05:30picture ke saath rachna padhna jaise ehsaas ko jina hai<BR/>aapne aam aadmi ko jaise puri tarah likh diya ho<BR/>bhaut bahut badhayiश्रद्धा जैनhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08270461634249850554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-90240852485505907612009-02-06T21:42:00.000+05:302009-02-06T21:42:00.000+05:30bahut hi badiya. lokal train ke yatrion ke jariye aapne aam aadmi ki majbooriyan or khushiyon ka bahut hi achha varan kiya hai.शिवराज गूजर.http://www.blogger.com/profile/11697430098933812273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-16628233432552055542009-02-04T01:32:00.000+05:302009-02-04T01:32:00.000+05:30hi.u really write very nice poems............please keep up the good work..........ASHISHhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08524581463613699831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-37996056763850509052009-02-03T12:39:00.000+05:302009-02-03T12:39:00.000+05:30hey khushi after reading this post. i inspired to write something about our delhi metro.<BR/>so i try to write some lines on delhi metro <BR/>plzz checkit out on my blog :)abhishekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12800124473149730095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-92060028769748466932009-02-03T12:00:00.000+05:302009-02-03T12:00:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.abhishekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12800124473149730095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-39765945267049558932009-02-01T20:41:00.000+05:302009-02-01T20:41:00.000+05:30oh mujhey apne purane din yaad aa gaye local train ke.bahut achha chitarn kiya aur tasveerein bhi bahut kuch yad dila gai. dhanya vaad.bhawnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01524665656092886448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-91431834878871415962009-01-31T13:42:00.000+05:302009-01-31T13:42:00.000+05:30nice one...ileshhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03570067964402579561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-34654746302787421152009-01-28T19:53:00.000+05:302009-01-28T19:53:00.000+05:30mumbai ki locel..apne ap me ek jivan he..me khud mumbai ka hu aour bahut se anubhav mere mastishk me bhi ked he..me achchi tarah se samjh sakta hu is jindgi ko...aapki shabd maalaa me rachnatmak mahak he..jo achchi lagiअमिताभ श्रीवास्तवhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12224535816596336049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-50861500378019863022009-01-27T13:28:00.000+05:302009-01-27T13:28:00.000+05:30^ aap sabhi ka shukriya..<BR/><BR/>@ Abhishek, aap ne sahi kaha shaayd aur acche se likh sakte thay.. kintu kafi lambi poem ho jati to padhne mai utna maza nahi aata..<BR/> By The Way, ye maine jo likha hai khud ka anubhav yaha kavita ke roop mai post kiya hai.*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-28423538975666391612009-01-27T12:38:00.000+05:302009-01-27T12:38:00.000+05:30hmm not bad<BR/>actually a nice poem abt mumbai local<BR/><BR/>but aur achhi ho sakti thi yaar kuch mazaa nahiabhishekhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12800124473149730095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-8247407094578620802009-01-27T11:58:00.000+05:302009-01-27T11:58:00.000+05:30Yep, there you truly see all the shades and shapes of life. I think they truly symbolize life.<BR/>Nicely put.....Sandyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03039201382199860505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-19929358552870815002009-01-26T21:00:00.000+05:302009-01-26T21:00:00.000+05:30Wah..wa<BR/>achhi kavita hai bhai...योगेन्द्र मौदगिलhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14778289379036332242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-24242513935551591952009-01-23T22:43:00.000+05:302009-01-23T22:43:00.000+05:30picturisation through words..... a great art,different activities of different strata of society at a single place...its our railway( may be mumbai ki local or anywhare else')emotionful poem....good work"SURE"http://www.blogger.com/profile/06944616806062137325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-12091906545678885972009-01-23T20:37:00.000+05:302009-01-23T20:37:00.000+05:30Mast hai...Nikhil Agarwalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15577456588350065564noreply@blogger.com