tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post7579803352450825132..comments2009-11-02T18:22:22.135+05:30*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-43732447767055335212009-11-02T18:22:22.135+05:302009-11-02T18:22:22.135+05:30i really liked this one...How Dohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10997565750098001380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-20217178904357725462009-10-31T13:28:17.759+05:302009-10-31T13:28:17.759+05:30aap ka shukriya nirmallaji, vish and mahefooz ji...*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-74736309376219545372009-10-28T11:55:59.538+05:302009-10-28T11:55:59.538+05:30agar paani mein lag sakti hai aag.... to ped par bhi khil sakte hain khwaab........<br /><br />bilkul sach kah rahin hain aap..........<br /><br /><br />bahutachchi lagi yeh kavita....महफूज़ अलीhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-44211047510503741612009-10-22T15:23:47.150+05:302009-10-22T15:23:47.150+05:30wahhho yaar u shararti ladki....bahut khoob samjhdari wali poem likhi aapne ...waise aapki pichhle kae mahine se mere blog par dastak nahi hue hai....to dhyan den...<br /><br />Jai HO mangalmay hoVisHhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02950211759405767205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-27495670990616145112009-10-11T17:46:48.929+05:302009-10-11T17:46:48.929+05:30आपका ब्लाग देख् कर मैं तो जीना चाहती हूँ। कल्पना भी क्या चीज़ है सुन्दर रचना शुभकामनायेंNirmla Kapilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11155122415530356473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-76003443035599744322009-10-08T11:59:39.168+05:302009-10-08T11:59:39.168+05:30yours simple words are enough to improve my work. so Thanks a lot @ indianhomemaker, जी.के. अवधिया, M VERMA, ओम आर्य,अर्शिया and Vijay Kumar Sappatti for visiting and posting comments. <br />@पवन *चंदन*ji, aap image pe click kijiye to aasanise read kar sakte hain..*KHUSHI*http://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-7905500897556565112009-10-08T10:56:07.931+05:302009-10-08T10:56:07.931+05:30sonal , bahut acchi nazm .,. padhkar bahut sakun mila .. shabd bahut khoobsurat ban padhe hai ..<br /><br />meri badhai sweekar kare.<br /><br />regards<br /><br />vijay <br />www.poemsofvijay.blogspot.comVijay Kumar Sappattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06924893340980797554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-37338340157258406922009-10-07T18:10:21.971+05:302009-10-07T18:10:21.971+05:30सोनल<br />ब्‍लाग खूबसूरत है<br />ख्‍याल खूबसूरत हैं<br />लेकिन आपकी ये जो पोस्‍ट है इसको पढ़ने में आंखों पर अत्‍याचार होता है। इसमें कुछ परिवर्तन करें। ये मेरा सुझाव है इसके लिए आप बाध्‍य नहीं हैं।पवन *चंदन*http://www.blogger.com/profile/02419277158229138144noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-78619823192082206262009-10-07T16:09:34.993+05:302009-10-07T16:09:34.993+05:30खूबसूरत ब्लॉग, सुंदर रचना। बधाई।<br />करवा चौथ की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएँ।<br />----------<br /><a href="http://ts.samwaad.com/" rel="nofollow">बोटी-बोटी जिस्म नुचवाना कैसा लगता होगा? </a>अर्शियाhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14818017885986099482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-78402309169145868832009-10-07T16:01:40.368+05:302009-10-07T16:01:40.368+05:30khushi ki is duniya me ek aag hi laga di .....badhiya.ओम आर्यhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05608555899968867999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-6235585983721470182009-10-07T14:30:34.316+05:302009-10-07T14:30:34.316+05:30अगर पानी ---<br />तीखा स्वर, उचित आरोह<br />बेहतरीन रचनाM VERMAhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10122855925525653850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-80080599027661118832009-10-07T14:19:28.309+05:302009-10-07T14:19:28.309+05:30मर के भी किसी को याद आयेंगे<br />किसी की आँसुओ में मुस्कुरायेंगे<br /><br />जीना इसी का नाम है ...जी.के. अवधियाhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09998235662017055457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16636178.post-41684241030358888732009-10-07T13:52:41.257+05:302009-10-07T13:52:41.257+05:30Sach hai, aisi duniya mein rehna aasaan to naheen... :(indianhomemakerhttp://indianhomemaker.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com